Statutory warning:
If the following lines sound kiddish, foolish, random bakwas, then they actually are all of those.
If they sound a tad meaningful, a tad nice and a tad purposeful, then they actually are all of those.
Its ok when they kill you in the light of the day
You get used to it and take it anyway.
They kill you on a friday and come back on a wednesday
But you forget it all anyway, its ok, its ok.
You get mangled to the hilt, you get charred away,
But those moments remain with you for a day.
Nothing's gonna change everything's gonna be this way
Until you wake up and have your say.
Let the tolerance have a leeway
And the actions have a subway.
But dont't get complacent and say its ok
Rise from the ashes and make your way.
15 comments:
No No. Its not okay! :(
This could have waited till 28/11. To mark the completion of a year.
Beautifully written.
Nice one...
"
Rise from the ashes and make your way."
Last line is too good and nice liked it
Well written
@G: Ha re. It didnt strike me. Thnx nyways.
@Girish: Thnx man.
@ Swati: Thnx!
Definitely it is not O k but Definitely it is very well written :)
@Monica: thnx :)
wow ! what was that btw ?? :P
okay jokes apart..it was some real serious thought ! and presented in a subtle manner :) compliments !
@Nu: Hey thnx thnx...good tat u put tat word "compliments" at the end :)
nothing new to write ?
@Nu: Here comes one :)
You have to express more your opinion to attract more readers, because just a video or plain text without any personal approach is not that valuable. But it is just form my point of view
Very shorts, simple and easy to understand, bet some more comments from your side would be great
Rise from the ashes
And make your way!
.... Too good sir! :)
@Dhanesha: Hey thnx yaar :)...and thnx for visiting my blog which is like one of those veerana khandars from a 1955 horror oldie wherein no one visits this blog :) :)...only the privileged few get an access ;)
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